Hello Fallblade! My name is 123 MrBeast6000. Very, very small mistake I saw in the new Brutalizer page. The discription says "thet" not "that". See for yourself. Sorry if this was a waste of your time ;(
No need to thank me! But you also put the coma after and in the sentence, " he kept an amber locket for himself and, when Nishant found out." words like "and" and "but" go after the coma, I'm sure you already know. There's also a run-on sentence.